PROTOTYPE l TEST
For this class we needed to have mocked up a draft copy of our brief with all our own imagery and refined text. Emma and I remained working on our separate spreads but kept with the blind drawing theme so they were all cohesive. Unfortunately, since Emma had a workshop in the weekend she wasn't able to completely finish off all of her imagery. I had all of mine though so together you could see the line we were going on.
In a group with two other teams we laid out our spreads and got some really good feedback on our brief. They all liked the blind drawing style as well and how it links to the youth audience nicely. The main constructive feedback was that the imagery I had for the desired actions page (a ball of yarn) was a little confusing and didn't connect well with the topic. Otherwise it was more small details with the layout and headings etc. At this point we just needed to refine and finish off the imagery then come back together (diamond thinking!)
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